Narrative dialogue notes

• watch your tags 
• what goes before she said I said quietly
• use sparingly but to enhance tone
• realistic doesn't mean real get rid of um
• not a transcript
• use purposeful punctuation
• give speech patternes due to charctor poatterns
• age background and education
• cut out names and see if you can tell who said what
• dont have to begin at first sentence or last one 
• start at the meat
• punctation
• everry time somone speaks start a new line
• use a double quotation
• punctuation in parentheses
• comma or period? do not understand
• in anovel diouluge should


• reveal charctors relationship
• move the story forwardd
• increase  tenison
• develop chaecrtors emotions or traits
• do not use as a filler
• use said less